Eye behavior can give subtle messages which people pick up in their daily life. It tells more than words can. Meeting or failing to meet another person's eyes produce a particular effect.When two Americans __1__ look searchingly at each other's eye, emotions are __2__ heightened and the relationship becomes closer. However, Americans are careful about where and when to __3__ meet other's eye. In our normal conversation, each eye-contract lasts only a few seconds before one or both individuals look away, because the longer meeting of the eyes is rare, and, after it happens, can generate __4__ a special kind of human-to-human awareness. For instance,by simple using his eyes, a man can make a woman aware of him comfortably or uncomfortably; a long and steady gaze from a policeman or judge intimidates accused. __5__ In the U.S., proper street behavior requires a nice balance of attention and inattention. You are supposed to look at a passer-by just enough to show that you are being aware of his presence. If you look too little, __6__ you appear haughty; too much, inquisitive. Much eye behavior is such subtle that our reaction to it is __7__ largely instinctive. Besides, the codes of eye behavior vary dramatically from one culture to other. In the __8__ Middle East, it is impolite to look at the other person all the time during a conversation; in England, the polite listener fixes the speaker with an inattentive __9__ stare and blinks eye occasionally as a sign of interest and attention. In America, eye behavior functions as a kind of conversational traffic signal control the __10__ talking pace and time, and to indicate a change of topic.

　　答案:

　　1.把produce改为produces

　　本句中两个主语meeting和failing to meet another person's eye 用or连接,这时谓语动词应该采取就近原则,与最相邻的主语一致。

　　2.把at改为into

　　此处的动作应该是look into(注视),而不是一般的“看”(look at)。

　　3.把where改为how

　　上下文介绍的是目光交流的方式方法。

　　4.把after改为when/if

　　5.在accused前面加上the

　　intimidate(胁迫)是一个及物动词,后面不能只接形容词,此处应该加上定冠词,与accused构成名词短语,表示一类人,即“被告”。本句的意思是:例如,只要运用目光,男人就可以让女人很自在或者不舒服地感觉到他的存在;而警察或法官的长时间的注视可以威吓被告。

　　6.删除being

　　7.把such改为so

　　8.把other改为another

　　表示不定指代的“一个或者另一个”应该用one and/or another。

　　9.把inattentive改为attentive

　　10.在control前面加上to

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