雅思写作到底怎么写
2024-04-04 17:39:27 来源：中国教育在线
在雅思写作中，一切的写作技巧都不如对写作的细节把握。在平时的写作练习中，雅思写作到底怎么写？下面一起来看看相关知识。
雅思写作到底怎么写
一.拒绝无谓的单词和词组
1.一些不必要的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。
比如：When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.替换无聊的表达，故意写出复杂的长难句，但是让整个句子显得特别冗长，其实并不会给你的雅思作文加分。
例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.
二.拒绝重复词汇和表达
1.雅思写作评分标准中有一点：丰富性。很多考生做不到在写作中使用更丰富的词汇和表达，也就与高分失之交臂。有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。
例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。
例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents＇farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
三.段落的中心内容与中心句
1.一个段落只有一个中心思想，这个中心思想通常会体现在一个总结性的句子当中，这句话叫做中心句。中心句在学术文章中常常落在段首，以方便阅读。中心句如同射击的靶子，要直指文章主题，这样后面的论点才不会偏离题目，因此非常重要。下面再给同学们一些句子，可以灵活应用于立论段，即证明自己观点的段落。
It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/first beneficiaries of this working fashion.
There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.
Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.
The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.
A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.
However,this does not mean that…
2.下面是一些可以用于让步段的中心句：
there are certainly some minor downsides in…
I admit that…is not perfect.
I understand why some people oppose…
Of course there are some opposite voices against…
the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.
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