雅思大作文范文：跳伞和滑雪等极限运动应该禁止

雅思大作文范文：跳伞和滑雪等极限运动应该禁止

雅思大作文题目：

Extreme sports,such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【话题分类】：社会生活类

【题目解析】：

这是一道从题型上比较简单的“观点类（agree/disagree）”题目，大意是：像跳伞和滑雪这样的极限运动很危险，所以应该禁止。你是否同意该观点？

该题型在表达观点上通常可以比较多样化；笔者选择的是“完全不同意”的“一边倒”写法，相对更加直接，观点力度更强。

支持“完全不同意禁止极限运动”的理由是：

1）人们会失去体验与普通运动项目不一样乐趣的机会；

2）人们会失去另一种减压方式，尤其是当其它方式不奏效时。

【写作思路】：

开头段：改写题目+明确表明自己的观点（完全不同意）。

主体段1：不同意原因1——人们会失去体验与普通运动项目不一样的乐趣的机会。

主体段2：不同意原因2——人们会失去另一种减压方式，尤其是当其它方式不奏效时。

结尾段：总结个人观点+提出建议。

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that sporting activities that are exciting and dangerous ought to be prohibited because they are risky.Personally,I totally disagree with this statement as this practice will hinder people from enjoying the fun which cannot be brought by other traditional events as well as benefiting from an effective stress reliver.

The primary justification for why I completely oppose the idea of calling a halt to adventure sports is the likelihood of the general public being deprived of opportunities to experience distinctive fun.Compared with common sports that people do for pleasure,extreme ones always embrace heights and speeds and provide an intense workout,which are characteristics that traditional activities fail to possess.Thus,when taking part in extreme sports,people are required to exert themselves fully,thereby feeling a greater amount of excitement.

Another point supporting my stance is that people will lose an effective method to reduce their pressure,especially when other approaches do not work.A large number of people today are stressful and playing basketball or going biking are normally treated as sports helping them unwind.In fact,those are not helpful to victims suffering from pressure going beyond the level of their feasibility while extreme sports can perform better as being in a dangerous situation triggers a release of dopamine in people’s brain,keeping depression at bay in a possible manner.

In conclusion,I strongly disapprove of the viewpoint that it is of great necessity to ban extreme sports merely due to their potential danger.This is because people will miss out on a great recreational activity and a very good approach to stress management without these sports.However,safety is crucial,so I recommend that participants should be fully trained before participating in these activities and sufficient precautionary measures should be made available.

(303 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.opine(v.)认为

2.sporting activities运动

3.prohibit(v.)禁止

4.risky(adj.)危险的

5.hinder…from…阻止

6.event(v.)（运动）项目

7.benefit from受益于

8.stress reliver减轻压力的方法

9.primary(adj.)主要的

10.justification(n.)理由

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