雅思大作文范文：媒体中限制报道犯罪行为细节

雅思大作文范文：媒体中限制报道犯罪行为细节

雅思大作文题目：

Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences,so this kind of information should be restricted in the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【话题分类】：媒体类

【题目解析】：

题目大意：一些人认为报纸和电视上对于犯罪行为的细节描述有负面的影响，因此这样的信息在媒体中应该被限制。在何种程度上同意这个观点？

题型特点：需明确表明对观点的态度；同时，题目中有一部分信息是观点的原因，对犯罪行为的细节描述有负面影响，对这部分信息不能忽略了回应，可以跟主体段证明应该被限制放在一起回应。

本文论文推进：开头引出当下关于媒体的争议，以及题目中的观点，表明自己立场。中间段先分析为何此类信息需要被限制，接着用让步的方式承认一些媒体上此类信息有一定好处，但过于细节的是需要限制的。结尾总结论点，重申观点。

难点：这道题容易让考生纠结限制的程度问题，建议同学们针对题目给出的关键信息detailed description进行回应，即观点是‘限制媒体上对于犯罪细节的描述’，而不是完全不对犯罪信息进行报道。

【写作思路】：

开头段：当下媒体自由度较高，对犯罪的报道也越来越丰富。有人担心此类细节的报道会产生不良后果，应该被限制。个人观点表示同意。

主体第一段：之所以应该限制这一类细节描述，有几大原因。受到最大影响的是犯罪的受害者，报道过于细节，会加重他们的身心创伤，甚至侵犯隐私。而对普通大众来说也无益，细节描述含有过于血腥暴力的内容，不仅引起不适，也让人担忧对年轻人的影响。三是对于一些潜在的犯罪份子，这些细节报道可能会给他们提供信息支持，刺激和怂恿了犯罪行为。

主体第二段：当然，适度的报道有正向作用，也有人认为在报纸和电视上对犯罪进行一定程度的报道能够让大众增强安全意识，了解犯罪份子的行为模式，改善保护措施，避免成为受害者。但报道的内容应当进行充分审查，进行关键的说明即可，细节的报道是没有必要的。

结尾段：总的来说，基于对群众和犯罪率的影响，犯罪的细节描述是需要受到审查和限制的,虽然报纸和电视有协助大众提高防范意识的责任。

【参考范文】

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner,which certainly arouses a great deal of concern.In light of this,some people believe there should be restrictions on such information.From my perspective,I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated.The group most affected by the news media's coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims.This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive,voyeuristic,and uncaring can largely violate victims’privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering.Not only that,the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details.In fact,these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people.Besides,it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes,since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and,in some cases,even healing.Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime.Indeed,the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs,such as new patterns of fraud,ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime.However,the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions,so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion,although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases,I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details,in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.

(331 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.degree of freedom自由度

2.exposure(n.)曝光，暴露，揭发

3.come forth出现，涌现

4.in a detailed manner以一种细节的方式

5.censorship(n.)审查制度

6.impose(v.)施加

7.high-profile(adj.)高调的，受到关注的

8.coverage(n.)报道

9.crime victim犯罪受害者

10.insensitive(adj.)不友好的

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