2022年1月15雅思大作文范文:用社交网络进行联系的利弊

2023-06-21 15:14:03 来源：中国教育在线

2022年1月15雅思大作文范文

2022年1月15雅思大作文范文:用社交网络进行联系的利弊，关于这个问题，接下来中国教育在线就给大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events.

Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活

【题目解析】

题目大意：有很多人每天使用社交网络来联系他人，以及获取新闻。你认为这其中的优势是否多于劣势？

【备注】本题相对简单，更多的同学会倾向于在写作时选择更容易展开的’优势大于劣势’来进行论述，本次将提供‘劣势大于优势’的论述，给同学们更多的参考。

【难点及要点】社交网络的涉及面较广，但题目聚焦在交流和新闻获取两方面，因此同学们也需要注意不过度展开。

【写作思路】

开头段：引出社交网络使用的广泛，并表明个人观点。

主体第一段：认可社交网络使用带来的便利；

主体第二段：转折到社交网络用于获取新闻的弊端，从新闻的真实性和人们的不良的看新闻习惯着手；

主体第三段：进一步指出社交网络用于交流的弊端，从降低交流质量入手；

结尾段：重申个人的观点

【参考范文】

Beyond daily communication, social media has also been used as a platform of spreading news events. Owing to this development, many people now have instant access to current issues. Despite the convenience and efficiency, I personally believe there are more disadvantages in such excessive use of social media.

It is true that the current technology and social media make news available to the public sooner than any conventional media like newspapers. This not only enables a faster coverage of news, but reduces the use of printed materials to some extent. What also needs to be acknowledged is the significance of social media in promoting interpersonal communication and information exchange. In extreme cases, like during Corona virus prevention and control, social media has proved its liability as an alternative for offline activities, such as family gatherings and school orientations.

However, many people are so tied up with social network that they tend to overlook the long-term side effects. The major problem with using social media in news reporting is that there tends to be a lack of fact verification before the sharing process happens. People are easily overwhelmed by the political arguments, posted selfies, shared links, and brand videos that enter the average news feed every day. When reading current events on social media, many people are found just scrolling past headlines and not wanting to read them, either because of information overload or the suspicion of fake news.

The notion that social media improves communication also tends to be simplistic and idealized. Very often, the quality of an online conversation is unfavorable because one cannot sense the emotion from the other person. Reliance on social media could hurt a person’s ability to have a face-to-face conversation, since it is unusual to convey a thoughtful message through spoken word or instant texting. Thus, the dependence on social network has in fact reduced communication quality.

To conclude, my view is that the benefits of using social media as a mean of daily contact and news events are tiny, compared with the negative repercussions in the long run. The excessive use has caused an unhealthy environment in society.

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【语言积累】

a platform of 一种…的平台

have instant access to 可以即时获取

excessive adj. 过度的

make sth available to sb 让某人可以获得某物

conventional media 传统媒体

a faster coverage of news 更快的新闻报道

in extreme cases 在极端的情况下

be tied up with 被…套牢

overlook v. 忽视

long-term side effects 长远的副作用