2021年11月6雅思大作文范文：社交媒体的利弊

2021年11月6雅思大作文范文：社交媒体的利弊

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events.

Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

媒体类

【题目解析】

题目大意：人们每天都使用社交媒体与别人交流以及获取新闻消息。

要求考生回答题目所给的现象"优大于劣"还是"劣大于优"。

这个题目是优劣势题型，但实际上也属于"观点类"题型，故一定要明确地在开头段给出个人观点，即"优大于劣"或"劣大于优"。

【写作思路】

Para 1：开头段 - 改写题目+个人观点（优大于劣）

Para 2：优点1 - 与他人保持良好的关系

Para 3：优点2 - 及时了解事件

Para 4：缺点 – 健康受到威胁

Para 4：总结段 – 重申个人观点+总结主体段要点+建议

【参考范文】

Social media are gaining increasing popularity, through which individuals communicate with others and obtain news information on a daily basis. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits of this prevail over the drawbacks.

The primary benefit of people's everyday exposure to social media is that they can maintain a sound relationship with others. Young people attending university in another city or country can keep in touch with their family and friends, conveniently sharing their lives with each other. Working adults can easily communicate with their clients, which eventually contributes to their work performance.

Another major advantage is that people can understand what is happening across their country or over the globe in a timely fashion. In the past, the public could hear about the world one or two days after the events had happened as the technology then was under-developed. In contrast, news applications on electronic devices today can automatically send users instant messages, making it possible for them to know about current affairs without waiting.

However, the disadvantages of people being exposed to social media daily cannot be ignored, the most obvious of which is that their physical health can be threatened. If they spend an excessive amount of time on social media, chatting and keeping up with the news, they may lead a sedentary life, lacking proper exercise. In the end, they are likely to suffer from eye fatigue, headaches, and backaches.

In conclusion, I reiterate that there are more positive influences than negative ones if people use social media in their everyday lives to talk to people and access news coverage. After all, they can maintain good relationships with others and know about the world without delay. Nevertheless, I understand that using social media every day can damage their fitness. Therefore, I suggest parents control their offspring's screen time and adults participate in various activities.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.gaining increasing popularity 越来越受欢迎

2.obtain news information 获取新闻消息

3.on a daily basis 每天

4.exposure to 接触

5.maintain a sound relationship 保持良好的关系

6.attend university 上大学

7.working adults 有工作的人

8.client (n.) 客户

9.contribute to 对…做出贡献

10.work performance 工作表现

11.in a timely fashion 及时地

12.hear about 听闻

13.under-developed (adj.) 不发达的

14.news applications 新闻应用程序

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